A) I think your assignment is good. You've used a lot of sources which has made the depth of your understanding really good. It would be good if there was some in-text referencing so we can see where the information came from, so that we can have a look at the original text if we want a deeper knowledge than what you have given us. The only problem I was able to pick up is that there is no summary on the images you have uploaded. Other than that, its a good page.
B) The content is well structured. It is good to link the topic to group project, eg,"the main function of peptidoglycan is to regulate the cellular shape... hold together the shape of cell ...allows to have some flexibility". But i found the section regarding to metabolism of the protein such as enzymatic and gram staining is a bit too lengthy, might consider condense the section. It's good to provide glossaries makes the page easy to read. In addition, you might like to consider devote a section on the current development/research regarding to this particular protein. Overall, i consider this is a well structured page.
C) I can see a good consise and informative introduction to the topic which is good. I have the feeling that structure part of your research can be outlined better and with more reference to the image. There were a lot of new words that i came across while I was reviewing this, however you put up a good solid glossary page which explained most of the new terms that I came across. Finally I think my understanding of the topic would be more easier with more illustrations and diagrams. But overall you have produced a good solid report on your research. z3224430
D) Overall very informative page about Peptidoglycan. I found the paragraph format a bit difficult to follow, made it all seem very lengthy and detailed. I had to read things through a few times to understand. Perhaps you can organize some parts of the page into dot points? Or add more subheadings? Such as under gram staining:
Gram positive bacteria
- forms a stronger peptidoglycan wall by creating a three dimensional mesh work with multiple layers
- their walls tend to be thicker, stronger and more rigid
- contain teichoic acid which is covalently linked to the peptidoglycan layer and lipoteichoic acids linked to the cell membrane.
- ... etc.
Just a suggestion though, I'm more of a dot-point kinda person =)
E-Hi there… in terms of word limit, I think it exceeds the max of 1000 words. So maybe you should try and cut unnecessary stuff. In my opinion it’d be good to explain gram stain procedure in dot point forms. Also, please make sure that references are cited within the written text. Also, try and find more recent research paper. It’d be great to include any current research that has been done on peptidoglycan lately. Other than that I have to say you have done well!! Z3191358
--Mark Hill 10:04, 20 April 2009 (EST) Well done you are on track with your online work.
--Mark Hill 18:42, 19 March 2009 (EST)Thank you for your feedback on the nucleus, I did not really get a feeling of whether these are concepts you had never heard of before, or were just listing relevant points?
--Mark Hill 12:37, 21 May 2009 (EST)Your images have no source or copyright information attached.
Homework assignments are now on this discussion page so that it can be separated from my individual project.
Peer Review for Individual Projects
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